Draft of public argument

In the following blog post I share my argument draft

Dear Peer reviewers,

All I ask of you is to read the few short paragraphs that I have written here. I ask you to tell me if the paragraphs are clear and use the picture of the film vs digital compression well. If you can see the differences and if my solution makes sense. Also if you can clearly tell what type of argument I am making. I will be including videos hopefully in this so they will expand more on it. thank you very much

Here is my draft