In the following blog post I analyze the strength of my paragraphs in my QRG.
I immediately see that my paragraphs do a good job at sticking to that PIE format. It gets the point across and the information to the people quickly. Then they can read on into the paragraph if they want more information of context. However, a general weakness is that they tend to get a little wordy, in some of the paragraphs it is needed however in others it is not. I will work on that in the revision process to see if I can consolidate the information and better get it accross to people reading it.
Here is the link to my paragraph analysis
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