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| Screenshot taken by Dylan Cotter 10/17/15 "analysis" Public Domain Usage |
Here is the link to my essay with the paragraph analysis.
Doing the following exercise I learned the following about my Essay
Strengths:
After revising my essay's intro and conclusions they have become a strength of my paper.
The main points of my paragraphs are clear and present
The presentation of ethos and pathos are clear and present in the paragraphs.
the explanations of the issue and why Tarantino's strategies are helpful or not helpful are good and clear.
Weaknesses
My main weakness is paragraph length, I struggled with the length of the explanation of the controversy, it was too long and had too many un--needed sentences and repeat phrases. Then the explanation of pathos is too short a paragraph and needs more explanation.
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