Revised Conclusion

In the following blog post I revise my conclusion and compare it to the old conclusion I had.

Here is the link to the draft of the essay with the new conclusion.

Here is the link to the essay with the old conclusion.

This new conclusion sums up the essay perfectly in my opinion. And more specifically it answers the "so what" question that the previous one does not. This makes the conclusion much more relevant and it makes it service the topic more than the last one.

Screenshot taken by Dylan Cotter 10/17/15 "conclusion" Public Domain Usage