Revised introduction

In the following blog post I link my new introduction for my essay.

I totally deleted my entire thesis and intro after the class on Thursday. I needed to rethink the topic and make my essay more focused on the topic. This intro is a lot more focused and is much more about the topic than the last one. It focuses a lot more on what the topic and the assignment is.

Here is the link to the new and improved intro.

Here is the link to the old and boring intro.